domingo, 6 de março de 2016

Correction (Writing exercise)

Hello!
I prefer to read printed books and I willl explain why.
First of all, I have always prefered to feel the book, the pages. I do not know why, but for me it is much better to feel the weight of the book I am acquiring knowledge from.
Moreover, I find it hard to sleep after reading in a bright screen. It takes me a lot of time to fall asleep.
Finally, I think you have a better vision of your reading progress with printed bookss.
That is why I prefer it! I hope I have helped you!

Sincerily,

Vitor


Observations:

- Try to reduce sentences
- Cheers = not formal
- Write clearer sentences